Wednesday, April 3, 2019

But it was the Wrong Colour! By James


MY YZF 450
Friday night I was walking down the road.  I heard rumbling so I start 
running I look around the rough hedge OMG I see my new bike a 
YZF 450 I walk over to the grungy thing but it was the wrong colour. 
Anyway I wheelie my way off with my new bike.                 

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  1. UnknownApril 7, 2019 at 5:40 PM

    Hi James I like the way that you've included very specific words and detail. Maybe next time you could expand on your story a little bit but other than that it's a good story.
    Keep it up.
    From isaac,h.i.s

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