Wednesday, April 3, 2019

But it was the Wrong Colour! By Jackson

Vroom! vroom! vroom! As the swift slick drag cars rev hard, as
massive black bold tires produce massive puffs of grey smoke
it pollutes the air seconds before they go.Tires still spin as pitch
black tar attacks the tire,as the tar attaches itself, but suddenly
the tires flick the sticky black tar off like flies.

Skert;zooming off the drages push to the limits down the straight
flat, but suddenly out of the blue one drager pops nitrous,but it
was the wrong colour.The nitrous made the flames blue.The
crowd was such curious to see blue flames instead of orange
flames but each person carried on cheering.

By Jackson

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jackson I like the way you've kept the story to the same idea but still elaborated on it.
    Kep it up.
    From isaac, h.i.s

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