Standing on chected floor, in an old haunted theater, at the end of an abandoned street I shake at my knees.
All I smell is dead rats, staile popcorn, Melted candy and dust! It makes me feel sick as my stomach twistes.
Turning to my right to see dust blanketing shelves, bolders of candy melted into the counter tops. Pills of shated glass rest on broken stairs, cobwebs surround every corner with mamith spiders in them.
A haunted ghost hotel thats what I think this is. I want to get out of here NOW!!
By Hayley T
Welcome to Room 8's Writing Blog site. This year we will publish our writing online so you can read it at home. Our writing will be raw and not always correct as we seek feed back from a range of people. Our writing may be a response to reading, 100WC writing, learning about writing or something completely different. Nothing makes writing more purposeful than having a real audience! Please read and share POSITIVE thoughts and comments to help encourage us to grow and develop as real authors.
STAR: I really like all the different sentence starters and descriptive vocabulary. WISH: I wish there was more to read because you are an amazing writer. By Alyssa
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