One day I was riding my motorbike up the back of the farm
when suddenly clank!!!!!The bike comes to A holt. I jump
of to have A look “empty what A surprise”I say aloud the
tank has not one drip of fuel.I try the phone but no reseption
I better start walking.
by Ben
when suddenly clank!!!!!The bike comes to A holt. I jump
of to have A look “empty what A surprise”I say aloud the
tank has not one drip of fuel.I try the phone but no reseption
I better start walking.
by Ben
Star: I love the way you used good punctuation by jimmy
ReplyDeletestar:loved the punctuation used in the story Wish: dont get me wrong i loved the descriptive language but i wish there was more descriptive language by jackson
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