I was dared to do this i was going into a haunted church. It is the scariest place in town.
I looked through the window it had dead rats,rat faeces mouse urine in it. My friends
open the door and push me in closing the door behind me.
open the door and push me in closing the door behind me.
“It smells like dead animals and faeces and some rotten stuff in here”I say. I walked
up the stairs they creak under my shake feet.
up the stairs they creak under my shake feet.
I think this was some sort of murder house. Or a old fashion movie theatre “I think I should
go now” i hear myself say in a shaky voice.
go now” i hear myself say in a shaky voice.
By Caleb
STAR:i really liked how u described about what you see
ReplyDeleteWISH:i wish you added a little bit more descriptive words