I enter a cold room that makes my mouth shutter. I try my hardest to keep still and be quiet, but my teeth crash together as I shivver.
Looking around everything seems very rundown antient. I take another step as my foot hits down onto the vintage, checkered floor. The staircase looks like one you would see in a fairy tale but much more old.
As I continue to walk up the stairs I stand on a old piece of clothing; which poofs up with dust sending a really musty smell throughout the room.
Its so quiet, all I have on my mind is "how did I get here? What is this?" I guess I'll never know...
By Malika
star: i love your ending... so intriguing
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Star: I like the way you said I stood on the price of clothing and it puffed up with dust. WISH: I wish I can read more it was excellent by jimmy
ReplyDeletestar:i really like all the descriptive language you used.
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Malika,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great response to the prompt. I love your description dusty, musty old clothing. You also describe the effect of the cold on your body very clearly, so I can imagine you shuddering and shivering.
Well done!
Michelle,
Melbourne, Australia