All I see is a lady in the giraffes incloser. The giraffe
is trying to lick the lady’s cheek with its big fat tounge.
The giraffes tounge is like the length of the Great
Wall of china.
The lady was just going into the giraffe a big salt, brown,
melted ice cream what was geasy.
By Jack
i really like the way your paragraphs made sense and how your paragraphs flow but i wish the you put in more punctuation.
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