Friday, May 3, 2019

The Swamp Creatures By Tim


It was a clear blue morning as I am walking through
the forest I hear the rumbling underground and feel
the vibrations. Suddenly the sky starts to turn grey.

So I run towards a clearing to get shelter. But I find
myself having to cross a foggy misty swamp. I decide
to cross the swamp…

But half way across my shoe gets stuck in the gooey
thick mud, darkness Surrounds me as I try to get free.
These mysterious swamp creatures rise up around me.  

I start  to run but i trip over a rotten tree trunk and
faceplant. I scream for help as they close in on me!...

By Tim

1 comment:

  1. i like the descriptive language and sentences and spooky stuff, i wish you would use better puncuation-Zayden