Friday, May 3, 2019

The Return of the Giant Bats By Hannah

The Return of the Giant Bats

Foggy and swampy land surrounds my bare blistered feet.

The smell of rotten old wood creeps up my nose. Then out 
of the blue Smokey mud slaps me right in the face. The 
odour is so intense I could vomit.

Down bathing in the slimy river is what looks to be giant bats 
with smelly ancient cauliflower hats. Wrapped around them 
was black mysterious capes.

Suddenly I hear unusual gurgling noises. The wind starts to 
whistle like a tornado.

This place is filthy and creepy I’m never coming back.

By Hannah

1 comment:

  1. Great opening sentence I love the detail.
    next time try to keep your sentences shot and snappy.
    Nice job Hannah