Friday, May 3, 2019

The Land Of Darkness By Aionee


The Land Of Darkness

Darkness surrounds me as I stare at a disturbing scene.

Mysterious creatures slowly slither along to a river of 
black gloop like they’re about to die.  Finally they stop, all 
they do is sit there waiting for something to happen.

All I hear is gusts of winds blowing into my ears. The 
screeching sound of snapping trees echo Through the air. 
Sizzling noises come from the creatures slimy wings.

I quickly rush down to the ugly creatures.
There wings feel like a pool full of slime
Black gloop follows the stream towards the creatures.

Creatures surround me with there long tongues wrapping 
around me. Get me out of here
  
By Aionee

3 comments:

  1. whoa great language it really gets you going it reminds me of the movie I zombie

    KEEP IT UP!!!

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  2. Hi Aionee,
    I enjoyed reading your poem. Well done.
    It painted a very scary, disturbing story in my mind.
    I'm wondering why you rushed down to these disturbing creatures?
    I hope you get out of there! FAST!
    Good work this week.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/

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  3. Aionee Nuku - tino pai to mahi. Love the language you have used, what visual imagery! Super proud you have been recognised for all the hard work internationally!

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